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Critiquing a Recruitment Ad

My Brand as a Potential Employee
When people meet me professionally, I want their first impression to be: “She’s motivated, grounded, and genuinely cares.” I bring a mix of creativity, leadership, and drive to the table. I’m not just here to check boxes—I want to build things that matter. I’ve worked in fast-paced environments where I’ve had to take initiative, adapt quickly, and work with all kinds of people, which has helped me become a strong communicator and team player. One of my strengths is being dependable and detail-oriented, but I also bring positive energy wherever I go. On the flip side, I sometimes take on too much because I want to help, but I’ve learned to manage that by setting better boundaries. What sets me apart is my balance—I’m professional, but I keep things human. I bring both structure and warmth into whatever space I’m in.

Headline: “People First Leader Looking for a Team That Values Growth, Grit, and Good People”

If you’re looking for someone who’s dependable, hardworking, and cares about the people they work with, you might’ve just found your next team member.

I’m someone who enjoys solving problems, keeping things organized, and making sure people feel supported and heard. I’ve led trainings, worked through chaos during events, and taken initiative when no one else stepped up. Not because I had to, but because I care about doing things right.

I’m looking to join a team where I can keep learning, lead with purpose, and grow alongside people who are just as driven. Whether it’s helping a team stay on track, building out a new process, or simply being someone others can rely on, I’m ready for that next step.

To get this message out there, I’d keep it real. I’d post it on LinkedIn, record a short video introduction so people can get a sense of who I am, and share it with professional groups and communities I’m involved in. I’m not trying to chase attention. I just want to connect with a team that shares the same values and is looking for someone ready to show up and do meaningful work.

4 replies on “Critiquing a Recruitment Ad”

Hi Madilyn! I really like how you presented your brand. I think it is great that you brought out your weakness but noted how you are working on it. There is always room to improve and work on things. You brought your plan and the ways you are going to work on your weaknesses. It is great that you like to keep things human! This can definitely help you stand out because not many are able to bring warmth and structure into the environment at the same time. Great headline! The headline and your introduction seemed to really highlight your values and your skills for whichever position you want to apply for. Something that I specifically liked is how you had a nice flow of how you are introducing yourself. You begin with what you have to offer, what you value, and then what you are looking for. Overall, great work and thanks for sharing!

Hello Madilyn,
I think it is so important to have workers that genuinely care. There is a very big difference from an outside perspective when someone doesn’t care other than a surface level.

Hey Madilyn! Your post really resonated with me. Your mix of warmth, professionalism, and purpose-driven mindset is so inspiring. I love how you’re focused on building things that matter and not just checking boxes. The way you balance structure with heart is such a rare quality, and your headline perfectly captures that. Your story about stepping up during chaos and leading with care shows the kind of leader any team would be lucky to have. I can totally see you thriving in a people-first, growth-oriented environment!

Hi Madilyn, I think you did a great job showing your personality and work style in a way that feels real and honest. You come across as someone who is dependable, thoughtful, and truly cares about doing a good job. I like how you combine being organized with bringing positive energy I feel it shows great balance. Mentioning your challenge with taking on too much is smart because it shows self-awareness and growth. Your headline is strong and makes people want to learn more about you. I also think your plan to share your message through a video and community outreach is really effective it helps build trust right away. One thing you might consider adding is a short example or story to back up one of your points, like a time you stepped up to lead or helped solve a tough problem. That would help people picture you in action. Also, your idea to use video is really smart it lets your personality shine through even more. Great blog this week! I really enjoyed reading it!

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