Hi Jenny,

I totally agree with you that this job description is very technical. While it is helpful to understand the more technical aspects of a position, it can still be quite difficult to picture yourself in the role. I think this is a common theme among many job descriptions across various industries. As the assigned article in this week's learning materials touched on, I agree that applicants would be more interested in applying for certain positions if the job descriptions were written in a more welcoming and easier to understand format.

Thank you for sharing!