After completing the peer reviews on two other essays I received, I got new ideas about ways I could incorporate their style of writing into my own essay. I think it was helpful to have read other students work before I turn in my own final draft. I felt that the essays I reviewed were much better than the essay that I wrote. Not sure if that’s because it’s my essay, or if I just received essays from two great writers. I learned that I should explain the studies I reference more and their importance relating back to my thesis.
