It was weird going through someone else’s paper. They both obviously put lots of time into making it accurate and connecting research to their idea. I didn’t want to be too critical because I respect the work they did to put that together. I tried to give constructive feedback and comments.
I gave the same feedback to both people and that was to add an opener and a closer paragraph because as an observer, I needed help understanding the main point and then the closer would have really helped to tie-up the final thoughts.
I will make sure to add those to my final review paper.
